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Date of upload: Apr 26, 2023 ^^
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4:47 on nicknames; it can also lead to a romantic moment when a love interest finally uses their real name instead of their unique nickname. I love this little detail in stories š
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Something that also helps me out is giving character's similarities. Opposites attract but I find it amazing when characters so different from each other find something they both do or agree on. I find similarities to be something that connects them because they can feel like they understand each other.
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I recently wrote a scene where two of my male (straight) characters have a bit of a heart to heart about what one of them wants to do with his life. I gave that scene to a friend to read and she flat out told me that she was expecting it to turn into a gay romance. I was dumbfounded but according to her, I managed to create a perfect emotional warmup that's usually found in a romantic/pornographic story.
Talk about untapped potential...
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the heightened emotional perception is what really blasts me into orbit lol
i saw a show where the main character had autism and the love interest was present when they witnessed a car crash that led to the main character having a meltdown. while everyone else was trying to help the victims in the crash, the love interest ran over to her and hugged her. she normally is averse to touch, but when he gabbed her, she asked him to hold her tighter and I just freaking LOST IT.
that stuff is so good! lol
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One of my fav things I like to put in my romantic scenes is one character being intrigued with another one and wanting to know them better just for the kicks, but then they want to be with this person more and more. I love this.
Another things is subverting the expectations of the character, usually ones that think somebody wants to be with them only because they are smart, pretty, rich, successful - you name it. And then they meet a character who couldn't care less about these things.
The "stand by me" characters. They are not together but when circumstances bring them together they can always rely on each other and they finally realise they want to be together.
Separate ways, constantly intertwining with each other. Rather than forcing a couple into the situation of togetherness when they have no choice but to fall for each other, their lives are constantly intertwining with each other. They meet at the right times and they meet at the wrong times but in the end they are destined to be together.
Common passion for something. Common passion seems to be so rare among book characters and yet it is often common passion or interest that brings people together. Like that Star Trek couple of fans who spoke Klingon, because they didn't know each other's native languages.
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Here are some examples of all of these in The Hunger Games, which has REALLYYY good romance in it:
-Forced proximity: Katniss and Peeta are both tributes.
-Shared secrets: Gale always talking to Katniss in the woods about his anger at the Capitol.
-Nicknames: Gale calling Katniss āCatnipā. (PS Abbie didnāt mention this in the video, but I think nicknames are better when they are only used every now and then. Gale still mostly refers to Katniss by her name, and only calls her by the nickname every now and then.)
-Heightened emotional perception: Katniss and Peeta have this too, but especially Katniss and Gale. There are several moments where they can immediately understand each otherās thoughts without any words, because of how much time they have spent in the woods together.
-Protectiveness: Katniss and Peeta are both constantly trying to protect each other, not just in the arena but outside of it, too.
-Constant reminders of each other: This can be a physical object (such as the pearl that Peeta gave Katniss), but it doesnāt have to be. There are several moments when Katniss is thinking about Peeta or Gale ā how kindhearted Peeta is, for example. Thatās especially prominent in Mockingjay after heās been hijacked by the Capitol, and now Katniss realizes just how much she valued his kindness.
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Shared secrets are sexy: Stanford hired students to play cards. But some girl/boy pairs were coached on how to signal each other to cheat a bit. When the game was over they filled out questionnaires. In the "How attractive did you find your partner?" question there was a huge spike in results - among the pairs who helped each other cheat. Secrets are intimate.
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Hey Abbie, just a quick question. I love romance just as much as the next guy but I also really love intimate and heart-warming friendships! It's just that sometimes cute heart-to-heart moments between friends can easily be confused with intimate moments between couples. I just want to know; are there any tips on how to write about cute close friendships without letting your audience forget that they are just friends?
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@dioneosphorus8847
1 year ago
Wait, shipping characters isn't putting them in a box and dropping them in the post? So that's why the beta readers were so confused.
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