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I have so much homework to do but instead I'm here procrastinating and writing my silly little song about my silly little life
I told myself I was worthy of you
told myself I didn't have to lie
But every day I wake up to your message
and I wish we were saying goodbye
And all my friends keep talking about you
Saying how you fit me right
And it feels like I'm lying again
By telling them everything is fine
I hold my hand out and ask the sky to take me somewhere new
somewhere without the eyes, the sounds and all the things to do with you
I hope you know I'm sorry, for leaving you to deal with all the hurt
But everything is rotting and I can't help but feel its all my fault
You hold back because you're scared you're not enough for me
You type the messages you know you'll never sent for free
You want my packaged love, delivered to you nice and easily
But I can't be that for you, I can't allow myself the peace, so
No I'm not afraid to tell you now
I hold my hand out and ask the sky to take me somewhere new
somewhere without the eyes, the sounds and all the things to do with you
I hope you know I'm sorry, for leaving you to deal with all the hurt
But everything is rotting and I can't help but feel its all my fault
Call upon your armies, vying for my blood since the day
I walked into your life, and stole the happiness away
I hold my hand out and ask the sky to take me somewhere new
somewhere without the eyes, the sounds and all the things to do with you
I hope you know I'm sorry, for leaving you to deal with all the hurt
But everything is rotting and I can't help but feel its all my fault
All my fault
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So I'm just a 14 year old who writes songs from time to time and this backing track was dope so here I am... Please do excuse my lackluster English, it is far from my first language. Here goes nothing:
Love
Beautiful, is what I thought as she danced, her head high
Dangerous, like a red rose but pricked with thorns
Furious, like a comet burning through the night sky
Uncanny, like the blossoming hope as they mourn
I see her lurking in the shining of my motherās eyes
I feel her blossoming as I look up at my whole life
I feel her tearing me apart, skin to bone
But sheās the one I yearn whenever I feel alone
I guess this wretched girlās called love
Criminal, is what I think when I see my parents
I donāt know why I canāt see her when Iām looking at them
Fading, is what sheās doing from past to present
Sheās still strong and there, but sheās just not the same
I feel her firm rhythm on my fatherās steady hands
I see her lovely smile as I give up my seat for her
I see her peeking as Iām laughing along with my friends
And sheās always there whether it be near or far
I guess this mercurial girlās called love
Beautiful and dangerous, Wise but preposterous
She can heal you and break you at the same time
I feel her shadow as the tears come rushing out
I hear her whisper through my brotherās words
I donāt want anything to do with her
But I want her because Iām fragile like a house of cards
Sheās not a wicked girl nor is she a wise woman
Sheās just a feeling Iāve been trying to hide for way too long
I guess this feeling is called love...
Please leave a like if you like it. It makes me happy...
peace
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(Verse 1)
Why canāt i just feel normal
Thoughts run inside my brain
Little things make me hella emotional
I think im going insane
Oh tell me how to feel normal
Please, tell me how to feel normal
Iāve cut myself multiple times
I try to speak but all I do is cry
(Chorus)
If I could make one wish
It would be for it to come true
I swear Iāll do anything
To stop what ever Iām going through
Excuses to leave
Itās harder to breathe
Please stop this crap
I would do anything
Things in my mind start to shade
Oh i canāt handle this
Please, Iām only in 6th grade
ITS SHORT BUT YEAH THATS MY LIFE šāļø
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Im standing in this ball room
Thinking about you
Trying to understand how days go by
No one really knew you
like Iām supposed to
Everyone says itās going to be alright but what if I die
What if I die for you
What if I cry for you
What If I plead to you to come back tonight
What if I fall for you
What if I land for you
What if I beg the lord to bring you home tonight
But What if I die
How do I go on without you in my life
How do I move on from the traumas I hear at night
How do I say to you that Iām alright when Iām not even right
But what if Iām dieing inside
What if I die for you
What if I cry for you
What If I plead to you to come back tonight
What if I fall for you
What if I land for you
What if I beg the lord to bring you home tonight
But What if I die
Iām losing my mind not knowing whatās wrong and right I keep asking myself
What if I die for you
What if I cry for you
What If I plead to you to come back tonight
What if I fall for you
What if I land for you
What if I beg the lord to bring you home tonight
But What if I die
I guess Iāll die
To make it alright
To have you back with me just one more night
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Here's my try in writing lyrics..
My Love
(Intro)
instrument
(Verse 1)
I woke up to you calling out my name. (mmh)
A smile appeared right on my face. (mMmmmh)
Darling i missed you yesterday. ooh
i never knew that love is so beautiful.
(Chorus)
Ever since i met you then
my life got better again
Ever since you said 'hello'
a light shined brighter than the sun.
brighter than it ever been.
you got me out of the hole.
i never wanna let you go.
cause i don't wanna be lost anymore.
(Verse 2)
You held me oh so close to you. (you)
Nothing can change my love for you. (for you)
I put my arm around your waist. (mmmh
)
to pull you closer to my heart.
(Chorus)
Ever since i met you then
my life got better again
Ever since you said 'hello'
a light shined brighter than the sun.
brighter than it ever been.
you got me out of the hole.
i never wanna let you go.
cause i don't wanna be lost anymore.
(Bridge)
instrument
(Chorus)
Ever since i met you then
my life got better again
Ever since you said 'hello'
a light shined brighter than the sun.
brighter than it ever been.
you got me out of the hole.
i never wanna let you go.
cause i don't wanna be lost anymore.
(Outro)
instrument
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As a singer of many many many years.. I'm showing my age.. after playing in a number of bands and still do, I have one piece of advice for anyone getting into writing lyrics. My advice is keep it simple, do not fall into the trap of over writing. Yes that is an actual thing, over writing lose the charm and simplicity of a good song. The average listener will only remember a chorus to a song. So let your feeling out, enjoy writing, enjoy singing just have fun with it. Don't over think it. Let it flow out of you. Cheers my friends.
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so this is the first song ive made, lmao it sucks
(verse 1)
sometimes when i look at you
my face turnes to a shade of blue
that i wish i could comprehend
and i could just pre-tend
that as we got older and our looks got colder,
we could go back to the day we met so i could just have stayed in bed
(chorus)
what if we never met?
what if i couldve stayed in bed?
maybe all our probeloms would go
but not the memories we hold
and all the times ive spent in bed waitnng for that love you text
when i could have been with a friend
and you knew it would hurt me but you did it anyway
why did you do it?
why?
(verse 2)
sometimes when i look at you
my face turnes to a shade of blue
that i wish i could comprehend
and i could just pre-tend
that as we got older and our looks got colder,
we could go back to the day we met so i could just have stayed in bed
bed, bed, oh-oh
(chorus)
what if we never met?
what if i couldve stayed in bed?
maybe all our probeloms would go
but not the memories we hold
and all the times ive spent in bed waitnng for that love you text
when i could have been with a friend
and you knew it would hurt me but you did it anyway
why did you do it?
why?
(bridge)
im bracking inside,
the joy you've filled me with were all lies
and i want to take it back.
all back.
all back
oh
(chorus)
what if we never met?
what if i couldve stayed in bed?
maybe all our probeloms would go
but not the memories we hold
and all the times ive spent in bed waitnng for that love you text
when i could have been with a friend
and you knew it would hurt me but you did it anyway
(outro)
but you just look at it as another day, oh
.
.
.
another day, oh
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Ok yall, tell me what you think
Verse 1:
I see you standing there on the floor,
I see your eyes they're wanting more, But it's not me, the one they want.
They're lookin at her in that satin dress,
Over there lookin all picturesque,
Right then and there, I get jealous.
I've never felt this way before...
Chorus:
I just wanna dance with you,
While the lights are dimmed and you,
Tell me that I'm the one.
We can dance until the sun sets,
You'll pull me close, and I will say,
I love you today and every other day.
And that is the day.. the say I'll have your heart.
Verse 2:
I see her lookin at you,
I see her eyes bright ocean blue,
And it's you, the one she wants.
She slowly makes her way over to you,
I see your bright big smile too,
Right then and there I start crying.
I've never felt this way before...
Chorus
Bridge:
I know i shouldn't feel like this,
But i can't help my emotions,
I don't know what to feel,
Someone help me,
Is this real?
Chorus
Outro:
She's dancing with you on the floor,
I've never felt this way before...
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@daniella.meeke.6530
3 years ago
Iām going to use this, Iām gonna write a song for the first time, Iāve always felt in my heart Iāve wanted to sing
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