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Genre: Music
Date of upload: Jan 28, 2022 ^^
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Wrote this song last week in one day
[Verse 1]
I missed your call cause it didnāt make sense
And I just canāt recall when I liked your pretenses
[Pre-Chorus]
Itās under review so I can strike it through
Keep forgetting you so I said bid adieu
[Chorus]
I just canāt lie
Got no motivation so why even try
I donāt know why
Iām missing a call from you, got no reply
[Verse 2]
I tried to stop you from breaking my heart
And I canāt find the pieces or the will to start
[Pre-Chorus]
Youāve come from anew but Iāve stricken you through
Iāve forgotten ābout you and Iāve said bid adieu
[Chorus]
I just canāt cry
Got no invitation so why even try
I donāt know why
Iām missing a call from you
Got no reply
[Bridge]
Walking right past you Iām walking right past you
Wish I would pick up the phone when itās past due
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I used to write poems, but since 2015, began to put melodies to them and converted them into songs. When I discovered you on you tube, I was inspired even more and am so thankful to you for your informative, musically educational and inspiring videos. Thanks very much indeed, Annie. God Bless you. I wish you and your family A Very Happy New Year 2022.
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One of the most important principles of writing that I know, which is not mentioned here, is, āDonāt tell, show.ā You can hear this principle in action in two very fine songs of the late 1960ās, āWho Knows Where The Time Goes,ā by Sandy Denny, and āChanges,ā by Phil Ochs. Both songs deal powerfully with the same subject, the bittersweet passing of a relationship with time, without actually telling us about it directly. Both songs are available on YouTube, and are must-listens for anyone who is serious about learning how to write great lyrics.
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Songwriting is one of my favorites hobbies. It makes me feel so comfortable and help me go through hard times. I wrote this song a couple weeks ago. SZA was my main reference to write this.
Out the mud by Guvvs
Fool me once and fool me twice
Done of being stupid
Done of believing in your eyes
You're the one that never tried
You keep blaming on me
And I fall another time
"Didn't wanna did you dirty
I just wanted to feel your body on me"
Didn't want none isolation
But you a guilty temptation
I I I I I got it out the mud
I I I I I got it out the mud
I I I I I, I just wanted trust
I I I I I, but you just wanted lust
I wanna trust but you leave me blind in the haze
I wanna trust but you leave me blind in the warzone
You were busting out the window
In the middle of the night, oh
What if I complain, would you change?
No, you won't
You don't pick up the phone
Make me run outta oxygen
You make me feel like a gem back in the mud
When I just wanted trust
When I just wanted love
And you just wanted lust
I I I I I got it out the mud
I I I I I got it out the mud
I I I I I, I just wanted trust
I I I I I, but you just wanted lust
"Didn't wanna did you dirty
I just wanted to feel your body on me"
Didn't want none isolation
But you a guilty temptation
Didn't wanna be this lonely
I just wanted to be the one that you need
While the whole world shine above me
I just wanted to be the one you need
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This a song I made for my friend's breakup xd
Left on read at 4 am
I'm sunken deep, stuck in my bed
In a hole, I can't escape
It's the same as yesterday.
My energy wasted on someone like you.
Sent one text a week; now I'm feeling blue
Because we used to be best friends
is this where our fairy tale ends?
[softer] One-time summer fling...
[Chorus]
So why do I get this feeling when you're not around?
Why do I get this feeling; that without you, I'd rather drown
Rereading old texts funny how I thought you were the one
But now you're gone, and now you're gone.
[softer] One-time summer fling
My love wasn't reciprocated
you're a clear reminder of the mistakes I've been making
so why do I feel like this?
You're too hard to resist
(softer and quieter tone)
Maybe if I keep telling myself
That this was just a summer love
I can convince myself
that I was enough
That I was enough (emphasis)
So why do I get this feeling when you're not around?
Why do I get this feeling; that without you, I'd rather drown
Rereading old texts funny how I thought you were the one
But now you're gone, and now you're gone.
One time summer fling.
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Making my final escape
Going down now every lane
Using any turn
Why do I never learn
Not to get myself into these tragic situations
Xeno, heās at his peak aggression
Goes way beyond just sinister intention
The song is called endless till the end by me lol
Iāll take what you said into account thanks
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I wrote this song just now, in maybe 30-40 minutes? But I'm really proud of it! It's like a dark love song,
The current title is: I am yours, you are mine.
But if anyone has any title suggestions, you can tell me!
Anyway, I'll stop talking, and give you the song!
[Verse 1]
Once upon a lifetime,
I thought this day would never come.
Where I would finally meet you,
And I could be in love.
I never could imagine
What this world would would be,
Without ya.
You're the everything to me,
And I need you to survive.
[Pre-Chorus]
I'll love for my entire life
You're everything I need
You're exactly what I'm looking for
And all I ever want.
I'll love for all enternity,
And I'm sure you'll love me too~~
[Chorus]
Even when you're dull sometimes,
You're glowing with the brightest light.
Even when you are the one who tears me up for good.
I'll love you even now and then,
I'll love you 'til the very end,
I'll love you 'til the day I die.
I'll love you on our final ride,
Even if you don't reciprocate,
I'll never let you go.
[Verse 2]
It's always a wonderful feeling,
When you tell me what to do.
I'll always, always do it, but only if it's you.
When you are not here,
I just sit here in the silence.
My thoughts just stay here, still,
And you always will be mine.
[Pre-Chorus]
I'll love for my entire life
You're everything I need
You're exactly what I'm looking for
And all I ever want.
I'll love for all enternity,
And I'm sure you'll love me too~~
[Chorus]
Even when you're dull sometimes,
You're glowing with the brightest light.
Even when you are the one who tears me up for good.
I'll love you even now and then,
I'll love you 'til the very end,
I'll love you 'til the day I die.
I'll love you on our final ride,
Even if you don't reciprocate,
I'll never let you go.
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Hi.
I wrote this song about losing touch with a friend a couple of hours so please give me some constructive criticism!
I wondered what crossed your mind
Every time your eyes met mine
Wish I could ignore the signs
Cause what is we got lost in time?
I felt us falter through the screen
Reminders of us keep haunting me
Because I know weāre
Not friends, not enemies
Weāre strangers with memories
I guess I just canāt believe
Youāre exactly what you said youād never be.
It feels like just yesterday
Your white sweater, mine was gray
Unexpectedly you pulled away
Why didnāt you stay? Why didnāt I wait?
I felt us falter through the screen
Reminders of us keep haunting me
Because I know weāre
Not friends not enemies
Weāre strangers with memories
I guess I just canāt believe
Youāre exactly what you said youād never be
Itās getting harder to pretend like we never happened
Cause Iām faking a smile
Saying it didnāt matter
But my eyes still linger just a second too long
Lay awake at night wondering where I went wrong
Try to relight a spark when I know itās gone cold
Tell myself Iāll be fine if I just give it time,
Even though Iām not the friend you wished for.
I felt us falter through the screen
Reminders of us keep haunting me
Because I know weāre
Not friends, not enemies
Weāre strangers with memories
I guess I just canāt believe
Youāre exactly what you said youād never be.
Thank for reading! Hope you liked it!
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āDear universe, dear life
Iām trying so hard, but thereās no light in sight
Dear universe, dear life
Why is it with me that you always pick your fights
Iām trying to stay strong
But thereās no motivation within me
No one asked for this song
But Iām putting it out for the lonelyā
Thatās what I have so far :)
Update: I thought of a little verse about what if feels like to have anger issues 2/11/23
You feel like the curse within me
Every single time I go back to
Angry (angry, angry, angry)
I go back to angry (angry angry)
It feels like a comfort
When Iām suffering
But really,
Everythingās getting worse (gry, angry, angry)
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@Lk6Channel
2 years ago
tip: some albums that helped me a LOT with songwriting and exposed me to a new style of songwriting and changed me FOREVER and I improved SO MUCH thanks to them are Evermore and Folklore by Taylor Swift!!
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