Views : 21,121
Genre: Entertainment
Date of upload: Oct 13, 2023 ^^
Rating : 4.855 (29/769 LTDR)
RYD date created : 2024-05-20T20:40:57.794882Z
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Top Comments of this video!! :3
Man, having electric only locks is the worst idea. Someone fire the builders who came up with that idea.
Anyways, this was fun, though the raptor teleporting under the table in 2 seconds was rather silly. I did get a laugh though because I thought it was just clipping its head up through the ground. I agree with some other criticisms around here. Still, I enjoyed~ Hope you do more.
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nice work! though a slight critique, if you're going to title it as a found footage film then you shouldn't get the pov shots of the raptor or be able to see its reactions to change unless the cameraman is directly observing them doing so. Analogue horror short film would apply better, but, other than that really impressive work, keep it up 👍
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this looks and sounds amazing. good job. but heres some constructive criticism: I think you should have only left the shots from the camera pov. seeing the raptor shots took me completely out of the experience and degraded the horror element. try applying the alien logic; we fear the unknown, henceforth, dont show the raptor at all until its final attack, show glimpses of it like when the character hides under the table. but dont reveal the threat in the middle of the film by showing the raptors pov or its legs running through the jungle. i feel like you just had to leave the camera pov and this short film would have been perfect. anyways, you did an amazing job with the animation quality. i hope to see more in the future!
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3:02 dam that raptor got a head of steel. It ran full speed into a big iron door and didn't even care.
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You don,t need to show scene like 1:13 it will be less scarier. I mean just keep one first person view...that's more terrifying i guess
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@Dinoslay
3 months ago
4:51 “Surprise, mothafricka!”
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