PokeVideoPlayer v23.9-app.js-020924_
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Views : 9
Genre: Entertainment
License: Standard YouTube License
Uploaded At Sep 27, 2024 ^^
warning: returnyoutubedislikes may not be accurate, this is just an estiment ehe :3
Rating : 5 (0/6 LTDR)
100.00% of the users lieked the video!!
0.00% of the users dislieked the video!!
User score: 100.00- Masterpiece Video
RYD date created : 2024-09-28T02:37:14.284299Z
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Top Comments of this video!! :3
I realize that English might not be your first language, but let me try to help you out. If you want more subscribers there are things you must do first to improve you channel. Some suggestions:
1) No one likes the robot voice.
Use your own voice. Or get someone else to tell the story.
2) You can't keep switching between male and female.
For a Male, Boy, or Man you use:
He, Him, His, Son, Brother, Father, Dad, Daddy, Uncle and Grandpa or Grandfather.
For a female, Girl, Lady or Woman you use: She, Her, Her's. And Daughter, Sister, Mother, Mom, Mommy, Aunt and Grandma or Grandmother.
3) For this particular story the word should not have been bruise but instead scar. A bruise is temporary while a scar is permanent.
Good Luck!!!
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@PigeonHoleAnimations
1 month ago
The brothers must have spoken to each other, if they married then they would have said “I do” to eachother
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