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Ensure requesting feedback from those qualified to give it --not just anyone....
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I welcome feedback at anytime. I posted what I thought was a masterpiece, and recieved criticism that it was a load of info dumping garbage. It was the kick up the hooper I needed to get my writing in a much better place.
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I got good reviews, but the book did not sell well
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this needs to be taught to evey 📝
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I JUST DONT GIVE A FUUUU
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@55maltesers
1 year ago
I have two points about things thay are generally taught in youtube videos, websites and writing groups, that I would like to challenge.
1. Prologues, why are they so frowned upon? Personally, I love a good prologue, it sets the mood for the story, gives us a taste of things to come, an introduction the overpowered character the hero needs to stop, introduces us to the plot and the world the writer imagined. They make me want to read on to find out how what was in the prologue was either relevent or how the dilemma we are introduced to within them is resolved.
2. Adverbs. I started reading The Wheel Of Time, and the first few pages are full of them. As is the first few pages of a second book I've started "Young Samurai" because I was bored at work and it just heppened to be in my bag. Again, they are everywhere in the first few chapters. Why are we advised against things that are in books that are selling? I have avoided adverbs like the plague, I feel like I should add some when I finish and get to my editting phase.
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