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One thing I am constantly debating is how much to reveal
TLDR MC accidentally shot his fatherās foot off. Nobody but him knows. Ever since this moment he has been very cautious and safe with guns but he makes a habit out of wriggling out of responsibility.
MCās arc is taking responsibility for his actions and allowing himself to grow from them. This culminates in a moment where someone turns his gun on him but MC knows that heās left the safety on. The one secret heās learned from has finally given him a chance.
Right now Iām thinking of having the backstory revealed in three different parts
1. Two hecklers at a gas station mention it.
2. He has a bad dream where some of the details are muddled.
3. (Towards the end) He remembers in clarity what he had done. āIāve never been perfect. Iāll never be. But I can be better.ā
Does anyone find this idea healthy for a story or is this subjectively bad writing?
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@u_t_d_s_h-1_a
1 year ago
There's a newly copyrighted genre of literature that crosses between the minimalistic format of a novella and a full length novel, its called 'Ficvella'. I keep setting out to write novellas but end up always with full length novels...
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